Mom doesn't want a dog she says that they smell like trash,
and when you come home you hear a great big SMASH!!
Mom doesn't want a dog she says when its all slipery about,
the dumb dog has to go out!
Mom doesn't want a dog she says they shed too much,
and you will always be in a rush!
Mom doesn't want a dog she says if it gets fat,
then it'll look the a big rat!
Mom doesn't want a dog she says the waste the money in the bank,
though I agree with her, I dont think she'll like the snake!!
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wadda ya think
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Funny write.
Ha ha ha that was a funny surprise ending ... maybe your Mum will let you have a dog now ... Keep writing love, because I like the happy go lucky style you use for it is fresh and 'tongue in cheek' Well done and keep up the good work....
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humorous
Very interesting. LOL I think my mom would prefer the dog!! LOL I liked this and it did make me laugh. However, I think the rhyming is a little too forced at times. Especially the second verse of each stanza. But other than that.. Its pretty good!!
Great job!
Ashley
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GOOD JOB
I like it Josie, it's really good. -
thanks
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That was great jos! U Rock!
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Ah, most moms don't want a dog! Heheh, I liked this, nice flow and a very funny topic. Great work! ~Pixie~
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WOOHOOO!!!
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