Hiding my face in my hands
I sob, my heart is broken
Saw you with another girl
It tore me to pieces
Obvious, our love never was
So much wasted time
I just can't look
At the love you're showering
For some other girl
I thought that was me
And I guess that is not so
This betrayal hurts so much
I can't look at you
Anymore and if I do
I'll die
Author notes
Hope this is good enough!
A contest entry
- I Can Not Look - closes late this evening by CarolDesjarlais.
600 points, ended May 1, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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We go through these hurts a hundred thusand times a liefetime...when someone does not live up to our dreams...it really does hurt. ty for entering.
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wow!
this poem makes me think of a movie I saw long ago,
so sad but yet it was meant to be, wonderful post good luck!MM
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