Billowing steeples
Of winding smoke
Dispersing on my breath
Does it make you choke?
Reddened skin
On a sunny day
Grassy hilltops calling
Beckoning my way
True to self and reason
True to asking why?
Momentary treason
Against the blackened sky
Live
Let live
Asking always
What to think
Pushing through to moments
On those rainy nights
Living in the days
Beaming down upon us
Who's to say I'm wrong?
Wanting just to hold on
In the stories living
In the nightmares dead
Better, worse, or neutral
Funnier, I said
Who's to say I'm crying?
Who can see the clouds?
Standing here in blackness
Hold on
Hold me for a moment
Touch my lips and skin
Taste me for a second
Forgotten
Leave alone this moment
Days, or months, or years
Touching for a second
Satisfy my tears
Knowing for a second
All I want is this
Tomorrow its all over
I can understand
Never spoken
Only seen
Search our eyes
Taste me for the moment
Only you I see
Then it's truly over
Hold me forever
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Great!
Although this poem is very abstract, it is also very beautiful. Sometimes it's hard to get a point across when writing in an almsot abstract way like this, but you did a great job with it. Keep up the good work!
~Mon Amour Ange
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