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Tomorrow

Billowing steeples
Of winding smoke
Dispersing on my breath
Does it make you choke?

Reddened skin
On a sunny day
Grassy hilltops calling
Beckoning my way

True to self and reason
True to asking why?

Momentary treason
Against the blackened sky

Live
Let live
Asking always
What to think

Pushing through to moments
On those rainy nights
Living in the days

Beaming down upon us
Who's to say I'm wrong?
Wanting just to hold on

In the stories living
In the nightmares dead
Better, worse, or neutral
Funnier, I said

Who's to say I'm crying?
Who can see the clouds?
Standing here in blackness

Hold on

Hold me for a moment
Touch my lips and skin
Taste me for a second

Forgotten

Leave alone this moment
Days, or months, or years
Touching for a second
Satisfy my tears

Knowing for a second
All I want is this
Tomorrow its all over
I can understand

Never spoken
Only seen
Search our eyes

Taste me for the moment
Only you I see

Then it's truly over
Hold me forever

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  • mon amour ange
    May 5, 2007

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    Great!

    Although this poem is very abstract, it is also very beautiful. Sometimes it's hard to get a point across when writing in an almsot abstract way like this, but you did a great job with it. Keep up the good work!
    ~Mon Amour Ange

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