Electric blue would be my perfect shade
Tints of sadness, yet funky and bright
Sometimes my personality is bubbly
And others, I can be like water, pale
But blue, as my favourite colour, appeals.
A contest entry
- Appealing Colors, Darkened Souls by EatYourSunlight.
300 points, ended May 16, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - B is for... by Pandorea.
800 points, ended May 5, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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i like it...describing a colour and yourself as that colour. i liked in particular the line;
"Tints of sadness, yet funky and bright"
thanks for your entry
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hahaha =]] i loved this. blubbly, pale. haha i loved how you wrote that its amazing. really discribtive, really unquie. i loved itttt
xoxox keep writting -
coool! i like it good job!
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