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Defiance

Defying the stereotype
Ninja
Supposedly
Killing without fault
Silently
And steathily
But no
I prefer
To sit
And play
With my chinese
Fortune telling
Square
Much more satisfying
Than throwing
Shuriken
For sport

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  • jacbgd2 gold member
    May 1, 2007

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    I really enjoyed reading this poem... It was a bit on the humorous side...... this was a welcome surprise for the picture and the information to work with...  I thought it was a good poem...


  • The Cube
    April 30, 2007

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    Pretty commical acttually. At least that's how I see it. Definately different considering it is nothing like Itachi. Haha. Good work!