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Friendly Weed

Dandelion
Sunny and bright
Smiling, Basking, and Growing
Friendly, but annoying
Weed

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My first attempt at any sort of cinquain... This sort of has personification in it also. To me dandelions have always sort of been a friendly weed because I honestly think the flower is really cool looking. But I also think it's annoying because there are SO many of them, and they pop up when you least expect it! I always run over them with the lawn mower... Hehe.

Well I hope I did a good job with this!

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  • OnlyInMyDreams
    April 30, 2007

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    aww, i like it!its cute, and ive written some cinquains before, not recently though, quite fun to write actually, great job Carrie, love yasss and good luck in the contest!