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The Island


I was sitting on an island
just to be alone,
with just a book
no television,radio or phone,
I was only reading
wasn't doing any harm,
but suddenly I heard a voice
shouting with alarm,
you can't sit on this island
it's against the highway code,
you're sitting on an island
in the middle of the road.

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  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    July 3, 2007

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    LOL

    Now this is very creative lol... Gud job my friend and keep it up u crack me up honestly gud luck in the contest.. Ur in the prelimanary finalists


  • Andu
    June 4, 2007
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    I like it Nothing like good clean humour with a witty ending. Great write!


  • Edna Sweetlove
    June 4, 2007

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    About as funny as a kick in the teeth. Thank you for entering your poem apparently at random into this contest. Best wishes.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    June 1, 2007
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    He! He! Someone has always got to bother you for something these days. lol Great short write


  • thepoetssoul
    May 31, 2007
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    That was a funny poem I enjoyed your write.


  • heygoo
    May 25, 2007

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    This is cute. You set up a nice image of relaxing with a book on some perfect island, then we, amusingly, come crashing down to reality in the middle of the road.

  • delightfulmess silver member
    May 23, 2007

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    Thank you for entering my contest, I will be making my final comments when the contest comes to its close. Good luck


  • cali951
    May 17, 2007

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    Wow i didnt know a island could be in the middle of the road lol that was funny good job and good luck in my contest


  • Voodoo Eyes
    May 14, 2007
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    lol

    It's very cute! I wonder is there some hidden meaning behind it?


  • ebaby
    May 4, 2007
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    I love this short little poem with so much to say and they ryhme was wonderful .........


  • vjlvenus
    May 3, 2007
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    Lol

    This was really funny! I enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest =]


  • Timeless Wisdom silver member
    May 3, 2007
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    LOL. Thanks for this entry...i laughed out loud on this one. Great write and best of luck to you.

    ~Ray~


    PS: Please do not reply to this comment as this is an anonymous contest...please wait until after judging to respond to this comment. Thanks A Million


  • A Leper Messiah
    April 30, 2007

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    lol. Very funny. This was precisely what I was looking for, short sweet and to the point. No boring confusing story. Great job!

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