Yes, I have powers.
Yes, I am a vampire.
Yes, I live for blood.
I embrace life.
My gift is like,
another chance to live life to the fullest.
I have a heart,
that beats and pumps blood.
A heart that feels,
pain,
regret,
love,
sorrow everything.
My emotions run deep.
Deeper then mortals can every dream to come face to face.
I can die not once,
not twice.
A number be on estimating.
A distrusting fate but I live it.
I live for the night.
When I raise from my slumber,
the world is my playground,
to my every wants, needs, and desires .
I gain knowledge.
I seek the wonders of life and death.
I am what I am, a vampire.
I am meant to be a supreme ruler over all creatures.
I am meant not to been almost like being a ghost.
I wish to be seen by all.
I want the world in the palm of my hands.
Theses are all my wants and dreams.
They can and possible in time will happen.
But I rest my presences in the shadows.
My nature for..
I,
love,
being,
a,
VAMPIRE.
A contest entry
- 3 Options by A Murderous Lament.
350 points, ended May 4, 2007, 8 entries
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Comments
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good job but as a murderous lament said.you need to play around with it.but good luck in the contest.
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I love the extent of it. I think there are places that could be written so that they are really intense and overwhelming. Like being a Vampire is god! Make someone wish they had that power. I'll show you some examples...
"I have a heart, that beats and pumps blood."
This heart I hold, Beating from another life. Pumping blood through me stealing the life of another soul.
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"I live for the night. When I raise from my slumber, the world is my playground,"
From the moment I open my eyes, the thirst and desire for blood rises. This world in my playground and humans are my play toys, watch me devour their lives.
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Just mess around with it. Make it... mind grabbing. Make someone want to scream MUAHAHAH! Lol.
Great job though. Good luck in the contest.
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33
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