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Shoes! Shoes! I Must Have More Shoes!

Yes I love my shoes
I like to eat them all day
my belly hurts now!

Please tell me what you think

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  • Zachswife
    June 29, 2007

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    ha

    wow. so was this like a random thought? I almost laughed out loud, which would be bad b/c I'm at work!

  • MovieFan
    June 22, 2007
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    funny

    nice poem. this one here was a wonderful short poem.

  • HAHA

    I love this poem. It made me laugh. Thanks for sharing it with us. I enjoyed it a lot


  • exoticbeaches
    April 30, 2007
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    OMG, now this gives a new take on the statement EATING LEATHER! OMG this haiku is funny. good luck.


  • Olivias Violin
    April 30, 2007
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    lol


  • Melodies
    April 30, 2007

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    I am laughing and laughing at this...

    This is a contest where the poets' names are hidden from me but you sound like someone I know and if so, well... I am laughing and laughing no matter, anyway. What cheeky humour and I love it! Now, I am inviting everyone to join our group that we just started for poets who love their shoes and the link is on the contest page. I am laughing again!


  • Blueskywonder
    April 30, 2007

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    Shoes arn't to be eaten they are to be masde lovew too,lol
    A wonderful piece of strange poetry. Thanks for sharing


  • macandrew
    April 30, 2007

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    You're not supposed to eat them, just kisses.

    John


  • broken-colours
    April 30, 2007
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    *giggles* Such an odd haiku; very original! Best of luck to you in the contest.

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