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I live my life on the edge of a knife

I live my life on the edge of a knife
I just can't help it; I hate my life
This razor is my fucking best friend
It's the only thing that won't leave at the end

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  • nobodys-girl
    May 7, 2007

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    short but awesome. the pain in it is very easy to see and feel. i totally understand the "this razor is my fucking best friend" because that's basically how i spent my life last year. awesome write.


  • theghostofher
    May 1, 2007

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    wow this is a short poem but has so many feelings behind it. i cant put a part i love the most cuz then i would have to put the whole poem(hey why not its show that i really like it)
    I live my life on the edge of a knife
    I just can't help it; I hate my life
    This razor is my fucking best friend
    It's the only thing that won't leave at the end
    sorry but its just a really good poem. and i can relate to the whole thing
    good job no wait great job.

  • restful.soul
    April 30, 2007
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    short but sweet? or not so sweet. creative and good use of language. i know how you feel