“Cut my life into pieces”
the blood drips from my wrists.
The tears drips from my eyes.
We fought our last fight.
Heaven for you
hell for me.
The only way it should be-
The only way.
I acted like a foolish teenager.
You acted like a teenage fool.
Perhaps I should have used the kitchen knives to end it in front of you.
Perhaps I should have given you the privilege to watch me suffer to the end.
Perhaps I should have given you this gift many years ago.
You gave me the gift of life.
It is only fair I return the favor.
I have wrecked your life to the bitter end.
I have wrecked your life to tears.
I have wrecked your life to-
-Hell
Me
Your tears are bee stings.
And I know you have done all that you can for me.
I know that you have tried to stop the failure that is my life.
I know.
I appreciate your love.
I appreciate your peck on my cheek
I appreciate the cookies you made for me.
I appreciate those presents and glowing smile as I unwrapped Christmas presents.
As blood drips across the floor,
I use a red paint can to color the windows to match my sorrow.
I paint the house red!
My hand can no longer hold it as I grow faint and dizzy..
Walking into the kitchen the key wrack got my eyes.
It was a bit ironic and, despite my state, I snickered in my narcissistic .manner.
It says, “Good Day and Hurry Home.”
I look at it as I grow even more faint while blood rushed from me like the Mississippi River.
I pause
I write the letters above the sign,
I love you mother,
With the blood gushing from my wrist
The smeared blood and red windows is in essence,
A window into my soul .
Author notes
option 3 - life sucks- feel the pain.
A contest entry
- love/emo/ these dont really go together but in my head the do...?? by ChicaBoo.
650 points, ended May 14, 2007, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
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This was absolutly amazing. I absolutly adored it. Everything was described so well. Very well chosen title.
'As blood drips across the floor,
I use a red paint can to color the windows to match my sorrow.
I paint the house red!'
That was my favourite part. I thought it was an absolutly amazing poem and i loved every word.
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Very deep and powerful emotions. =] Excellent write, it was wonderfully written. Thank you for the entry and good luck.
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Crap.....ya beat me! Good job!
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ONFG!!!!!! i like soooooooooo nearly cried when i read that... i could feel the pain and sadness...i was amazing...you are a truly talented poet. you should be very proud
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omFg.. this is the best poem i think i hav EVER read!! i think its WONDERFUL!! i love all the emotion && pain that u can feel from reading this! its wonderful & i dont think there are words to describe how much i ENJOY IT && LOVE IT!
<33xoxo rachel
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holy shizz.. i felt the pain, the emotion, the suffering. wow this is the BEST ive read sooo far. i love it!! fantabulous job!! the odds of winning are in your favor now!!! wow.. GREAT job!!! best of luck.. not that you need it =D
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