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when pretty sentences have lots their meanings

We opened our mouths to speak,
but couldn't find the words to explain.

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baaad.
It's just what came to my mind first.
Idk.
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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    August 3, 2007
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    Not bad... Very expressive, know how you feel. Sometimes the right words don't always come naturally, sometimes the right words are the hardest things to come to. I believe you meant 'pretty sentences have lost there meanings' instead of lots... That's in your title =) Otherwise, wonderfully written.


  • bird-mad girl
    April 30, 2007

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    I agree.

    so amazing and beautiful in such a short piece.
    you did a fantastic job with this darling
    mucho love


  • petrichor
    April 30, 2007

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    this was so gorgeous. i loved the words and the title and the way that you sorted it out, absolutely beautiful really, and it's quite true. the simplicity was beauitufl.

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