In dark of night
Laying under the stars
I feel you shadow taunt me
Your spirit haunt me.
You consume me
Take my worthy pride
Steal my will to carry on
And leave me hopeless
You fingertips freeze my nerves
Turn my blood to ice
My heart to stone
My mind to rust
You float through the air
Poison lungs of helpless ones
Tarnish touch of powerless enemies
Desecrate the sight of already blind eyes
You replace the pain
With something numb
An insane creation
Another you.
Your thoughts are...?
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This is good; I pictured it literally, which was very cool, btw, but I payed attention to meaning behind it, too. This is my favorite part:
"You fingertips freeze my nerves
Turn my blood to ice
My heart to stone
My mind to rust"
Good Symbolism and Imagery.
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I really like this poem alot almost made me cry there lol good work
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wow i really like this a lot of deep thought into this
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