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The Time We Fought the Goo-Goo Man

The Time We Fought Goo-Goo man

Characters

Two girls-Katie (Catherine) and Emily

Setting- A house After a party

Emily: I thought Mom said they weren't leaving any chocolate… but here it
is!!

Katie: I know (pops a "chocolate" into her mouth) It's amazing!!

Emily: There's pop and chips and strawberries too!!

Katie: Look, here's the movie,

Both: Super duper doo!

Emily: Are you sure this is right?

Katie: Mom said it would be fine

Emily: I can't help it. I'm feeling that we're crossing a line.

Katie: It's like the time we fought the Goo-Goo man.

Emily: What does that have to do with anything, Crazy Katie?

Katie: We snuck around the dark lagoon

Emily (rolls eyes): On a silent night that had no moon

Katie: We snuck around from tree to tree

Emily: And then *I *tripped and scraped my knee.

Katie: The goo-goo man we thought was crazy.

Emily: Crazier than Blackfoot Daisy

Katie: He had big eyes that shot out lasers!

Emily: His claws and teeth were as sharp as razors!

Katie: His mouth could fit a whole kid in it!

Emily: Of course *I *wasn't scared not even a bit!

Katie: Not even when he grabbed us his big furry hands?

Emily: That wasn't in any of our plans!

Katie: I thought that we were done for

Emily: I was sure that we were dead.

Katie: Until he set us on the ground

Emily: And gently shook his head.

Katie: This awful monster we had feared

Emily: This scary Goo-Goo Man

Katie: Was nothing more…

Emily: And nothing less…

Both: Than our big brother DAN!!!

Author notes

I hope this is OK, because we actually wrote this for a play, but we only ended up using half of it. TCKansasKate and I both wrote it together, and so if I win, I'll give her half of the points. You don't have to worry about that. I hope you like it!

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  • A Leper Messiah
    April 30, 2007

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    This was pretty funny. I didn't really like the format, you could have just turned the whole part with the rhyming into a poem, that would have made a lot more sense. Good job and good luck!