The Time We Fought Goo-Goo man
Characters
Two girls-Katie (Catherine) and Emily
Setting- A house After a party
Emily: I thought Mom said they weren't leaving any chocolate… but here it
is!!
Katie: I know (pops a "chocolate" into her mouth) It's amazing!!
Emily: There's pop and chips and strawberries too!!
Katie: Look, here's the movie,
Both: Super duper doo!
Emily: Are you sure this is right?
Katie: Mom said it would be fine
Emily: I can't help it. I'm feeling that we're crossing a line.
Katie: It's like the time we fought the Goo-Goo man.
Emily: What does that have to do with anything, Crazy Katie?
Katie: We snuck around the dark lagoon
Emily (rolls eyes): On a silent night that had no moon
Katie: We snuck around from tree to tree
Emily: And then *I *tripped and scraped my knee.
Katie: The goo-goo man we thought was crazy.
Emily: Crazier than Blackfoot Daisy
Katie: He had big eyes that shot out lasers!
Emily: His claws and teeth were as sharp as razors!
Katie: His mouth could fit a whole kid in it!
Emily: Of course *I *wasn't scared not even a bit!
Katie: Not even when he grabbed us his big furry hands?
Emily: That wasn't in any of our plans!
Katie: I thought that we were done for
Emily: I was sure that we were dead.
Katie: Until he set us on the ground
Emily: And gently shook his head.
Katie: This awful monster we had feared
Emily: This scary Goo-Goo Man
Katie: Was nothing more…
Emily: And nothing less…
Both: Than our big brother DAN!!!
Author notes
I hope this is OK, because we actually wrote this for a play, but we only ended up using half of it. TCKansasKate and I both wrote it together, and so if I win, I'll give her half of the points. You don't have to worry about that. I hope you like it!
A contest entry
- FUNNY POEMS ENTER HERE IF YOU THINK YOU CAN MAKE ME LAUGH by A Leper Messiah.
600 points, ended April 30, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This was pretty funny. I didn't really like the format, you could have just turned the whole part with the rhyming into a poem, that would have made a lot more sense. Good job and good luck!


