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"Always remember we Love you"

You hold me,
as I cry.

You hold me,
as I sleep.

You whisper softly,
"it's ok."





.....



Is it really?...



Will you hold me,
as I shout?

Will you hold me,
as I curse?

Will you hold me,
as I blame?

Will you still be whispering those meaningless words?




.....

I don't think you would.


I think you'll watch,
silently.

After the silence,
you'll leave the room.

Than outside the room,
you'll make a quiet scream.

And into my room,
the accuser,
the judge,
and the jury will come.

And hand out my verdict,
(based on presumptions and misunderstood concepts)

All the while,
saying that you love me.....

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  • mydarlinghamburger
    May 2, 2007
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    This was really good... u should write more often... we've missed you


  • Shiny
    May 1, 2007
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    Wow. a little angsty but really good and well written. XD Keep it up babe!!!

  • wishing
    April 30, 2007

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    I like this. It sounds cliche but I really think I can relate. When I read the title this wasn't what I expect to read but any who I liked it. Nice Write!