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What is in a Nightmare?

The question you have to ask yourself is, what is in a nightmare? To truly understand my dreams. In a fragile mind for me, that nothing is really what it seems.
A nightmare is really your darkest thoughts, hoping to pull the trigger and not get caught.

Or is it taking that final leap, near a cliff perhaps, driving you mothers favorite jeep?

Maybe it's a fear thats deep within, no one knows execept the monster thats under your skin.

But no monster, jeep or trigger to pull, my nightmare is something much more full, of my darkest thoughts and fears, something in my head must of slipped it's gear.

My nightmare is much to bold, like being left out in the cold. 

Just the darkness covering me like a swarm, no blanket or clothes to even keep me warm.

No monster, jeep or trigger to pull, my nightmare is so much more cruel.

No one's here for me to reach, no one's here even to fight, no one's here for me to see in my own line of sight.

If you haven't guessed it my nightmare is being a lone, no one to help me up out of the cold.

Not the kind where someone leaves the room, but the kind where no one is coming back anytime soon.

If you really stop to think about this nightmare, it's really one of the scarest.

Becuase it can happen to any one, even who clam to be the bravest.

 

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    February 12, 2008

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    Being alone is my biggest fear aswell, you showed this in an excellent manner, telling a story to the reader


  • Danna Hobart
    February 9, 2008
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    Thanks for entering.


  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    January 26, 2008

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    This is a thought provoking write, you have a few typos in here though, especially in the last line. Best of luck in the contest.


    whisper


  • bloved
    April 30, 2007

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    nice write! I love the style you used and how everything came together in the end. This really explain the idea of a nightmare and what it means to you. thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.

    **Bloved**