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Brutal Blood

You fight
At night
Awake
To take
Their life
A knife

To cut
Their gut
They bleed
Indeed
Their blood
A flood


A thrill
To kill
Some one
For fun
Their fear
Sincere

They die
And cry
So kill
With skill
And fight
With might

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  • Lj-
    April 30, 2007
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    Awesome.
    Love the constant rhyme. Powerful, too.

  • amy86
    April 30, 2007
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    good witty poem well done