It's a self 'contamination'
Running through her veins.
It's feeding off her anger,
It's feeding off her pain.
The new wounds are 'gleaming',
With a 'sweet' tasting drip.
Of candy coated dreams,
[[Why don't you take a sip?]]
'Flesh' burns with 'kisses',
'F
a
d
i
n
g'
...away
[[Wipe away the 'scars']]
Your lips are burning with another kiss,
But they don't care who you are.
It's a self 'intoxication',
Of 'cocaine' filled dreams.
Another whore
[Throw out the 'trash']
And muffle her 'pretty' screams.
It's a self-injected 'contamination',
Kiss the needle,
((Let it 'numb' your body))
Milk-creamy goodness,
Another trip of 'ectasy'.
Everlasting flavours,
Left lying upon thy tongue.
[Isn't this ending tantilizing?]
Havn't the lies tasted so sweet?
((Cause honey your time is done))
Your mouth
D
r
i
p
p
i
n
g
With acid,
B.a.b.y take one final taste.
Just another |[teenage tragedy]|,
Another ((beauty)) gone to waste.
Author notes
okay, this is an example for my contest..
I used the wordbank and the option about drugs.
it's pretty crazy.. but just read it and you'll be like whoa wtf was she on?
i was on antibiotics and panadol. i was pretty sick today.
this poem however is about me.
yep. it is.
♥Burrdifly
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Very nice write! I'm sure that it has some very personal meaning, as your author notes imply. But I'm sure that it will touch those with the same addiction. I like the way you formatted Fading in the 3rd stanza, kind of like it is actually fading away
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definitely imaginative, id be lying if i said i wasnt amazed, thank you for entering and good luck in the contest
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Store bought drugs!!! wooooo! *clears throat*
Dis is awesomelyfantastic! lol. I luv da word, I put it in the dictionary I gave to Codey, lol.
But i rele do like dis poem. Tis' purdyfully written.
SUPERTACKLEFLYINGPOUNCE!!!
Lub ya
Tommy xo
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"The new wounds are 'gleaming',
With a 'sweet' tasting drip.
Of candy coated dreams,
[[Why don't you take a sip?]]"
omg that was anazing . i had to laugh when i read it, its just that clever.
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thanks darl...
i was dying for something sweet so i wrote a sweet poem
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Awesome write.I loved it!
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