who is so loving
forever giving
shining inspiring
wildly full of humor
talented cheerful
easy to be with
conversational
motherly daughterly
wifely bold
colorful imaginative
happy friendly
outgoing
immensely gracious
generous understanding
admired and cherished
A contest entry
- To the one you care about by A falling star.
2200 points, ended March 5, 2008, 19 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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simple but good. I liked it.
Thanks for entering!
-Sonya -
lovely eulogy to a dear friend..or perhaps a daughter.
its just sparkling with love and I like it ..
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wow
touching...very touching. simply put its beautiful -
How sweet a tribute. Very cute. A little rambling but in the name of love, everything goes!
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Wonderful
What wonderful words to give to your friend. Friendship like this one is so precious. Well done!
Hugs
- joanne
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this shows that whomever you speak of you must love alot...this is a great poem with many wonderful words... keep up the good work
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cool......nice vocabulary.Keep up the good work!!!
~Tia~
GOD BLESS -
All of these would certainly be admirable traits for a dear friend.
well written.
John -
I really like this poem alot !
It is a really good poem and it help's me to take my mind off of how the system stoled my poem that I did not even have written on paper for I wrote it at the last minute on here.It was to my one and only love that I fell is true! Good Luck and keep up the good work. And Thank You !
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Friends, true friends, are precious and rare, a lovely poem to tell others about them. One at least, who is all these things you describe here and more. Easy to read and understand why you thinks she is great.
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aww. that's pretty sweet. The way you're doing this for you friend, good job. (:
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I think the end of your piece would work better if your title just said "a dear friend".
Other than that - a lovely piece.
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I loved how this read...so fast and full of emotion...there is no doubt who is in controil of your pen when reading your writing....Thank you for sharing. keep up the incredible work. peace and light always in all ways, Kendal
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Wow, You must have a wonderful friend who you really do love to be with! I wish all friends could be as you have stated so well, but unfortunatly, that's not so. Great job in describing your friend and your use of vocab was excellent. I also liked how you didn't try to tell the reader, you only said the vocab and words. It added a sense of like the reader knows the person. Great job,
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Oh very good.
What a great friend this person must be!
Good job of describing your friend.
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First, I love how you didn't use punctuation. Too many would feel compelled to use commas, but because you didn't, it was that much more impactful with all the adjectives running into each other creating an over-all cohesive whole that describes the subject so well. The first two lines of the second stanza are my personal favorites.
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what a good rhythmic beat to this. this reminds me of the cards that i send to my friends, naming the numerous amount of encouraging words about them to them
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Rhythmic
It has a nice beat, and it's wonderful that you can describe someone's personality so vividly that you can feel like you've known her without even knowing anything of what she looks like.
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i like this poem it reminds me of myself sometimes
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Nicely Done
I like the fact that you are able to describe your friend without using visual imagery. I also enjoy how vivid the description is. Furthermore, I like the sing-song pattern. It sounds like something that would be read to music. Well done.
~Spike~
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The Friend
That you speak of here is truly a keeper.In life we do not get many like he/she. Nicely done
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Bob Fox
Thank you, Bob, for your comment and your applause.. Indeed I have met few other people like her. If any. A dear true friend. Many thanks..vivela
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good
good flow for short lines and truly a lucky friend you have that you should recognize so many of their qualities
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i loved it!! i do have one minor criticism though, maybe you shold consider no using the root word love twice in a row, it makes the poem seem a bit uncomfortable, besides that the poem flowed like a compliment one freind would give another, as if they were having a conversation, very good, just consider my suggestion
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Luciferschild
Thank you so much for your suggestions!! I did change the last line.. I think you were right about good words for a dear friend. Many. many thanks!! Warm Regards...vivela
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