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The knife



Am I not wanted?
Does anyone really care?
Would the world be better off
If I would just disappear

I have no one with me
Left to fight the battle alone
How am I to win the battle
That has gone on for years?

The knife
It’s my only way out
I’ll just leave
For I have nothing to lose

But I do have something to lose
If I leave, I shall be giving up
I’d be a quitter
I’d lose who I am

So what if no one is with me
So what if I have to fight along
At least I can do one thing
Prove them all wrong

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  • bunchnbunch
    February 20
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    bunchnbunch

    lexi don't do this. even though i don't know you i care about you. take it to God. read Psalm 23.


  • TheWayIllDie
    September 10, 2007

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    Wonderful writing

    Wonderful writing , i can understand it with all my heart.... though i love the last two lines "at least i can do one thing, prove them all wrong".... that is all us humans do these days isnt it....

    love jasmine xo


  • felixangel
    April 30, 2007
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    im okay thanks for the comment it is sad and it wat i feel on the in side


  • Amber Lee
    April 29, 2007
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    Oh so sad and painful,i hope your okay.