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Palace of Chandeliers

So deep the pain of life
Surely this isn't all there is
Surrounded by only mischief and strife
A home a palace of chandeliers

Nightfall comes quietly
There is no where to hide or run
The nightmares come quickly
Only dawn stops the laughter of their fun

The waterfalls are now all dried
All the soft organic matter hardened
The Stars wished they had not spied
As from their own I wasn't pardoned

Sorry my nightmares cause only strife
That's just how it is
Once I could no longer feel life
Welcome, come, be comfortable in my home of chandeliers





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  • silent bee
    April 30, 2007

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    this is great. you have created imagery and power in this piece. thank you for enetering he contest and best of luck to you!

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