Dear self, I must tell you,
I think you've gone astray.
You've been cutting and drinking,
You're really not okay.
You've become a fake,
You keep on lying.
Saying you're perfectly fine,
When inside you're really dying!
You're slipping away slowly,
Can't you see?
You're falling apart!
When did you become an abductee?
You think of ending things,
With the one you truly treasure.
Don't you realize?
That would only cause you displeasure.
You need to stop this nonsense,
Make some sense out of your life.
Do you really only want,
To deal with pain and strife?
Get your act together!
Suck it up and deal with this!
You don't really need,
To feel the blade's deadly kiss.
If only you knew how strong,
You really, really are!
Don't you see?
In life you could get so far!
So once again become,
The girl everyone once knew.
Because only you can change your life,
And change what has become askew.
Author notes
Came from the heart! Great contest!
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A contest entry
- † Letters From the Heart † by OurxBeginning.
380 points, ended May 1, 2007, 18 entries
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A lot of emotion is in this and I can tell it's from the heart. Very inspiring and filled with hope. I hope you can overcome all of this stuff. Thanks for entering and good luck. ~
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wow... i completely relate to this one! very well written
i dont no what else ot say but this was truely truely amazing! keep up the wonderful writting sis
i love you heaps, never forget that
take care
XoXoXoXoX
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