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Helping Hands

Held out to me your helping hands
Ever support me when I stand
L
ove and strength are freely given
P
urpose I have, from you driven
Inside my heart that beats for you
N
ever ending, my love so true
G
rateful you came into my life

Happy to be your doting wife
A
s I look back two decades plus
N
o mem'ry of life without us
D
estined we to be united
S
olemn the vows we recited


Joyce Le Lievre
(sunny day)

© Joyce A. Le Lievre, All rights reserved
April 29, 2007

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A Rhyming Acrostic done for my group, The Titles Challenge Group.

Background courtesy of; http://www.artistic-desginers.com/bkgds/designsbymarie

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  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    May 25, 2007

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    Another beautiful Acrostic, you certainly set the bar high for the rest of us, wonderful expression of love.... gorgeous background to, I think I shall add you to my faves if you don't mind

    Karen


    • sunny day
      May 25, 2007
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      Karen, Thank you so very much for the applauses and again such lovely words of praise. I do enjoy the acrostics and I love when I can make them rhyme also without losing flow. I am flattered that you are adding me to your faves and I will get a look at your work as well. Love and God bless, Joyce


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    April 30, 2007

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    Everything about this poem was perfect, from the beautiful background to your font choice to the words themselves. It is obvious that you and your husband have something special. Thank you for sharing this with all of us. Peace. Liz

    • sunny day
      April 30, 2007
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      Liz, Thank you so very much for the lovely words you have given me here. We do have something special and it's meant to last a lifetime. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this piece. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


  • JustSimplyLissa gold member
    April 30, 2007

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    What a beautiful write Joyce! It's darling how you've penned it and presented it. Well done!
    Hugs!

    • sunny day
      April 30, 2007
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      Lissa, Thank you so much for your lovely words on this one. It was where this title took me in the Group Challenge. I'm very happy that you enjoyed it so much and I wish the same for you. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    April 30, 2007

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    this is beatiful i mean that you did something wonderful here girl, keep it flowing and i like this right here

    • sunny day
      April 30, 2007
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      Aaron, Thank you for such a lovely compliment here. I am always left with a smile when I see your words. Love and God bless you my dear friend, Joyce


  • The Poetic Angel
    April 30, 2007

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    Joyce this is butiful ..i know the feeling very well... we have been so lucky to spend most of our life wif the man we love..butiful background it compliments the poem perfick xxx cheeky xxx

    • sunny day
      April 30, 2007
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      Judie, Thank you very much for the applauses and your lovely words. Yes we both have been very lucky and they have too. I forgot to credit the background and I thank you for mentioning that it was nice. It is a free site I got it from and they only ask that you credit them if you use them. http://www.artistic-desginers.com/bkgds/designsbymarie If you would like to take a look at it that is the link. They do have some lovely backgrounds. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


  • Lady-Pegasus
    April 29, 2007

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    Awww!! How sweet and i look forward to being able to say the time in 2 decades time! I also am glad tht I can at least say this although for 2 years versus 2 decades for i am happy and content as you are ! Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *

    • sunny day
      April 29, 2007
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      Lady P, Thank you for such lovely words. It sounds like your Vicster makes you very happy. I know you will be saying the same in the years to come. True love when found can't be lost, ever. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this piece. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce

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