Showers is running
Steam turned fog
Silent foot falls - open door
Arms around me,
Heartbeats wild,
Your hardened sex against me
Gets me wet inside..
I start to tremble,
Your fingers grasp at my hardened nipples,
Kneading flesh,
Pinching,
pulling.
Breathing deepens,
Fast not slow,
Lift my legs,
Wrap them round your torso,
Slide me down burying your hard shaft within,
My tight slick walls wrapping around like a silken glove.
Push my back up against the wall.
Push and pull
- me -
Hard and fast,
My hands roam my nails they dig,
I leave little red lines that appear in your skin.
Take me harder! ~ I cry
Pound in and out of me,
Faster!!! - I moan..yet, Scream.
I pull you lips to mine in this our frenzy,
This our dance..
And kiss you so deep,
Our breaths are for a moment taken away and we can not breath.
In that moment - The world spins
I become one with you,
I quiver and my body coils tight,
You pull and push against me like we'll never part.
As our fluids of love and life mix,
Only to be washed away in the hot shower in the end.
I can still feel you inside of me...
Author notes
Selenas = Michelle R.W.
A contest entry
- Public Places && Tangled Bed Sheets by bird-mad girl.
1200 points, ended May 19, 2007, 20 entries
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I like the way this eneded. that list line was like a punch in the face. it was both sexual and sensual yet kind of sad in this yearning way. I don't know, I guess it just depends on how you read it or feel it and drink it.
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Wow I actually like this, it is just great. Normally I go for doctor sues kinda thing but this poem has a great vibe running from begining to end. The only thing I wasn't 100 percent on was the line "our breaths are for a moment taken away and we cannot not breath." You are stating the same thing just in a different way in the same line. Other then that awesome
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