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this is to everyone....

this is to everyone,
who laughed instead of cried,
to the ones who stayed up,
just wishing to die.

this is to everyone,
who smiled when they hurt,
to the ones who stood up again,
after being kicked to the dirt.

this is to everyone,
who was ever called a freak,
to the ones who turned to the knife,
and always felt so weak.

this is to everyone,
who feels nothing at all,
to the ones who no longer care,
and are just ready to fall.

this is to everyone,
who lost their best friend,
to the ones who are ready,
for this pointless game to end.

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to everyone who has been hurt

tell me if you've ever done any of these things...let me know im not alone

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  • tearsOFmine
    May 3, 2007

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    omg that reminds me of me so much, i always have 2 stay strong 4 my friends. but really i have given up on everything. nothing will ever be okay. someone will always cause u pain. i give up on everything. i just dont give a fuck anymor


  • xxTheRadFreakxx
    April 30, 2007
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    Your not alone, i LOVE this poem =]


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 30, 2007

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    This is amazingly great! What a wonderful write for everyone. Believe it or not most of the world has been hurt, some just deeper then others...and some to recover sooner.
    Very nice flow and meaning. Just a great piece.


  • MetalHouse III
    April 30, 2007

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    ...was I right in thinking that the one line up there was for me? the freak part?...

    well...thank you...
    I love you


    • nobodys-girl
      April 30, 2007
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      mostly for you ya....but i've been called one to so i know how it can hurt even when you say it doesn't


  • lost-in-yesterday
    April 29, 2007

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    hun this is briliant! im mean brillian i love it with out a doubt. i have felt this so many time i love this hardcore

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