Legolas the fairest of all elves
So pure nothing could stand against him
And that includes you, my courageous friend
Not even you could stand against someone so simple
The bow an elves' weapon of choice
It always, so faithfully, stands by his side
He’s so fast with his bow you couldn’t even peep a sound
Before he’s shot you into a million pieces
So let us side with him and make him our leader
So you need not worry about him shooting you
Let him be your guardian at all times
And no harm will come to you
He’s one of the many elves that fought in the great battle
And he’s one of the many elves that survived
Without a scratch I dare say to everyone
So side with him and let him be the warrior just for you.
A contest entry
- Tinkerbell, Fairies and Elves~ Poets 13 and Under ONLY Please by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended May 5, 2007, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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cool really good
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I LOVE Legolas! That is a great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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my gods!! i luv legolas!!! now you make me wanna kiss him!!! hhahahhahah good job with it i really enjoyed reading this and imagining it
i like this line
It always, so faithfully, stands by his side
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"And that includes you my courageous friend"
should have a comma after you
It's a noun of direct address
"The bow an elves weapon of choice"
elves needs an apostraphe--elves'
possesive
"It always so faithfully stands by his side"
should have commas before so and after faithfully
Now that that's over, this is a cute piece and a great tribute to Legolas. It made me laugh in places and grow serious in others. Great effect and use of words for a poet so young. Keep up the great work, poet!
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Legolas is great, but I was VERY dissapointed when I leasrned that his character would be played by Orlando Bloom. I love Legolas as he is in the books, but in the mocies, he seems so much weaker and, well, I am just NOT an Orlando bloom fan. Orlando Bloom ruined everything. Now there are tons of fans of Legolas, but they arn't... most people never read the books until the movies came out, and a LOT of people never bothered to read them at all. At least Harry Potter has more real readers, though people didn't get into that eather until it was fameous..... anyways, I am WAY off track, how the heck did I get to talking about HP? I was just going to say I like your poem, I love Legolas, but hate the movie version of him. They did a good job with Aragorn though. And Elrond, and Saroman, and Gollum, but they killed Legolas and Frodo. Though Pippin is just like I always imagined him to be... anyways, nice poem
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Oh, this is awesome! You've done a great job capturing the spirit here. Bravo!
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This is such a cute poem
And he sure sounds like the kind of elf I'd want around me
You did a good job with this and I wish you the best of luck i the contest
love and
Grandma Granny Goose
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Legolas certainly is a great elf, thats for sure! I loved the films, and you have described him perfectly here. He is awesome with his bow and arrows! Great poem honey!
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