finger down her throat,
she knows that it's wrong,
all she wants is to beloved,
she just needs to belong.
step on the scale,
to see what she's weighs,
just a little too much,
no more food for that day.
cutting out pictures of "pretty" people,
hanging them on her wall,
the way she sets herself up,
all she can do is fall.
energy pills keep her going,
no more sleeping at night,
she know's what she's doing,
just isn't right.
it's their jokes that made her do it,
they killed her one by one,
now standing at her grave,
they realize what they have done.
Author notes
umm ok so i've been sorta dealing with some eating disorders lately and im trying to stop. im getting help. some extreamly mean girls arn't helping though anyway take what you want out of it.
Please tell me what you think
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I can totally relate to this poem. More then u would believe. I think your words ring so true for so many girls out there and u have expressed it so clearly. I hope you get the help you need. If you need to talk I am there for you, message me and I will help in any way can.
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Your words enter my mind resonate there and force me to feel their weight. You describe this experience perfectly and it takes shape in my mind’s eye. You imagery is top notch and brings life to this story. The author pours out her heart and paints her words with experience and emotion.
"to (beloved)" (be loved), "what(she's)weighs (she),
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thanks. i hate to say it is an experience but sadly it is. thankyou for your nice comment and your grammer hints, it seems grammer is one of my (many) downfalls. thankyou!
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SMACK EM
thats what you need to do! push there face to the dirt and say look at what youve done. no one desevers this. ever. and theres no way possible i can see that anything these girls have to say can be justified. whats done is done and whats lefts what you go don let them take that away. its not theirs to steal. i love this poem. i just wihs it wasnt true. good luck with everything and if you ever need to talk just email me. jess-m-martinez@hotmail.com
ttyl hun good luck
jess
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count me in too
you can always count on me as well. i agree with jess, and yes--BE A BIGGER PERSON!!! if you need ANYTHING AT ALL, feel free to email me too....flute_piano_holly@hotmail.com -
lol that seems to be what everyone is telling me to do....i wish i had the nerve to just beat their asses....guess i'm just too nice in that aspect...thanks for commenting and always being there for me...i really appreciate it.
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wow
this reinds me of myslef...i have weight issues and i don't know how to deal...my cousin and i are both made fun of in school and we both are now eating healthy. I have lost a total (in a week) of two pounds. slow is better than fast. remember--eat veggies, fruits, low SATURATED fats, low CARBS, exercise, and above all--REMEMBER THAT THE RATE AT WHICH THE POUNDS COME OFF IS THE RATE AT WHICH THEY'LL COME BACK. always remember that, and you're golden. You are pretty no matter what size you are (even though i haven't met you), and people should learn to love you for your personality, not the way you look.
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thankyou so much!i'm getting much better at eating healthy and lots more excercising, it's just sometimes when i feel like it'd be so much easier to just give up food altogether. but i know that isn't true. anyway thankyou so much for your nice comment!
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i Love it
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Sorry I hit this too late.
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So perfectly true. It just takes one person making another not feel good about themselves to cause a problem. People are cruel and the world is hard enough without that. Anything added to it can cause a problem. Everyone is beautiful in their design and the beauty of Hollywood and Magazines is not real.
Lovely write.
I am glad I stopped over, you write very well from the heart one real issues.
Great work!!!
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you are perfect...even if you see yourself as overweight, it doesnt matter...you are you and that is all that really matters...you are loved.I love you.
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wow, i like this very much. great work =)
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thankyou!
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I like it
I have a friend who suffers from eating disorders it can be very hard and I hope you the best in overcoming it. I'm a outcast so I know how much it hurts to be teased.
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thankyou so much for commenting! eating disorders suck...i hope your friend is doing well i really do.and im sorry that your an outcast...i also know that pain. thanks again.
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