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all a dream

i get lost in his eyes
as he looks in mine
i feel safe as he holds me
and tells me everythings fine
his lips press against mine
in a kiss perfectly deep
he wipes away my tears
as i begin to weep
his fingers wrap around mine
i know things arn't as they seem
because when i open my eyes,
i learn it was all a dream.

Author notes

ok so ya this sucked....bout a dream i had....i was with the most amazing guy till i woke up and relized im on my on....

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  • thepoetssoul
    June 23, 2007

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    To dream of him was the most important thing.It's to wake up and understand that we can still dream! That seems to be the problem.I really loved this write it was splended.NICE


  • mysticstorm gold member
    April 30, 2007

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    I hate dreams like those! Have been there when you realize it's a dream you just want to fall back into it.
    Damn subconscious!
    Nice job, short and sweet just like I like them.
    Best to you on that dream coming true.
    Love


  • lost-in-yesterday
    April 29, 2007

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    isnt he mind just cruel.(SPCHECK i cant spell) thats sad i hate it when that happens. nice poem thos i like it