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neighbours greeting

I waved at you through the morning air,You turned your head as if not to care

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  • love my jose luis
    May 9, 2007

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    I hate it when neighbors do that, you try to be nice and they are all bitchy back, that really sucks.
    ~Alix

  • Aurora Ceres
    April 29, 2007

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    Excellent work. It seems that is just how it is now adays. No one taking the time to say hi. Very nice!


  • Melodies
    April 29, 2007
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    WOW... a rhyming one-liner...

    with a true message, too! My neighbors' newspaper unraveled in their driveway this morning and their paper slowly blew apart in the wind and tumbled, page by page, all over their front yard and MINE! I picked up the mess in my yard and they had no idea that their paper even ended in my backyard! Your one line is very fine!