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Fun

Fun
Cool Hot
Running, playing, swimming
Terrific fun is everywhere
Biking, Gaming, Jumping
Super Great
Mirth

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This is a poem that I wrote in sixth grade....so they're probably really bad.

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  • zhaniswolf
    July 3, 2007

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    beautiful; just simply beautiful... it wasn't too bad for a sixth grade attempt.


  • photay.poetry
    May 1, 2007
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    lol. yep it horid. jk. its pretty good. i think that type of peom is so last year though.

    • yes, i know it is. Its a diamente. Thus the diamond shape. Truthfully, I forgot what a diamente was until i found this poem again.


  • MourningSun
    April 29, 2007
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    hi

  • MourningSun
    April 29, 2007
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    hi

  • MourningSun
    April 29, 2007
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    Same as I said for " The Storm"

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