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Bloody Death

"Im dying..."
Said she
She kept sighing
"I can feel my soul leaving"

She was dying
And the most bloodiest way
She then was eying
Her brother who was leaned over her body

"You..."
She said in a weak voice
"You knew this was going to happen"
"You tried to protect me..."

She said "You..."
"Anything you want me to do for you dear sister?"
She said 'Kill me."She said,He drew
His sword and said
"Sister why?

She said "To take me away from this land of war
And this is my last wish af my life..."
So he did so and he saw her soul rise from the floor
"Thank you....."Said a voice

And every body knew who it was
"Sister!I will never forget you!!!
Cried the brother
And everybody understood how much pain he was in

So they all cried out as well
And this is what they said
"We will never forget you Princess Cherry!"
And everybody started crying at the mention of her name

So they took her body
And buried in the royal cematerie
And everybody was at her funeral
Everybody was crying but especcially the brother

Author notes

as i sy im always inspired by something.but when i wrote this poemnothing inspired me.i wrote it because i was thinking about pain.my six year-old sister broke her leg last night,so im thinking about pain today.

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  • Sle3p
    April 29, 2007

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    why did she break her leg , this is simalar to other poem you made but its like an RolePlay poem thats nice m.h