Hope
when
all
seems
lost,
Can get us through many challenges.
Hope
when
all
seems
lost,
Can bring us our lost happiness.
Hope
when
all
seems
lost,
Can lead us to the end of the rainbow.
Hope
when
all
seems
lost,
Sets an example for others who are struggling.
Hope
when
all
seems
lost,
Can help us to keep on trying.
Hope
when
all
seems
lost,
Tells us there's still a chance.
Hope
when
all
seems
lost,
Can guide you through the storm.
~H~appiness
~O~pening up with emotions
~P~ain is almost over
~E~xample for others
Author notes
This is kind of different than what I usually do... It is formatted kind of odd and i added an acrostic at the end. Hope is one of the greatest things in life! Without hope, the world and everyone in it would have no reason to keep on trying!!!
A contest entry
- 0 by Lauren Noir.
850 points, ended June 2, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - If i Had one wish[Choices] by LeaPan.
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love this
The form of the hope, trickling down the side with the descriptive and beautiful words was great
The acrostic at the end was wonderful
It was so hopeful and wonderful
It could lift any one up
The words in it was so true, and oh so brilliant
Well done
Thank you for this wonderful entry
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yay you! this is a really cool style that i've never seen you do before....i like it mucho mucho much. this poem has a great message and is upbeat and positive which i also love. great job and good luck in your contest!
K-Jo
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