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In the Rain

I don't know why
It's always been this way
Life passes by
to where I am today
If I could change
one moment in my past
I'd hold you close
so maybe this would last

She walked into the rain
and left me here to dry
She drowned in her own pain
and left our love to die

Apologies
fade into lost dreams
The hurt remains
but nothing's what it seems

She walked into the rain
and left me here to dry
She drowned in her own pain
and left our love to die

If I could take it back, I would
to feel just one more kiss I would
TUrn my life around I would
but she's dancing in the rain

Author notes

Written 9/19

man I miss creative writing..
except for when mrs diaz tried to make me sing this in class.

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  • ForeverJenn
    April 29, 2007

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    I love your writing!
    [I'm envious]

    This poem is actually really beautiful..
    in a sad, missing someone kind of way.
    I'm sorry that you had to lose something/someone.