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Broken Glass

I'm starting to scare myself
with feelings so overwhelming.
Which was do I turn
to change me from what I'm becoming

[I thought I'd been breathing
but thoughts are misleading
This pain that I feel
has never been real.
My heart has stopped beating
My wounds have stopped bleeding
so now here I lay
too lost to be saved]

CHORUS:
Get me out of here
I fear each step I take
My mirror glares at me
I fear the glass will break

I'm crawling in the dark
Won't you just turn on the light?
I mustn't fall asleep
My dreams are a horrific sight

[I thought I'd been breathing
but thoughts are misleading
This pain that I feel
has never been real.
My heart has stopped beating
My wounds have stopped bleeding
so now here I lay
too lost to be saved]

CHORUS:
Get me out of here
I fear each step I take
My mirror glares at me
I fear the glass will break

You're taking me over
I can't let you win
My blood will not flow
through your porcelain skin

[I'll save you from the truth]
I will fight
[enslave you to youth]
I will fight
[I'll relieve your stress]
I will fight
[it's all for the best

Your thoughts are misleading
You haven't been breathing
This pain which you feel
has never been real
Your heart has stopped beating
Your wounds have stopped bleeding
and now here you lay
the soul I have saved]

Chorus:
Get me out of here
I fear each step I take
My mirror glares at me
I fear the glass will break
Get me out of here
I fear each step I take
My mirror glares at me
I fear the glass will break

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Written 4/27

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  • Crimson Ember
    May 3, 2007

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    Victoria. You need a band for these songs to have music too. I'm seriuos. Every single thing you write is amazing beyond words and I'd LOVE LOVE LOVE to hear the music you hear when put these words on paper or type them.


  • ForeverJenn
    April 29, 2007
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    First off. The first stanza..third line.. I think you meant "which way".

    I swear..one day..I'm going to pick one of your poems and you are going to sing it to me. So be prepared.

    But this is amazing as always.
    And I hope everything is going ok with you!