Don't tell me
How to live
How to fuck
Who to love
I am judas
I am Satan
Fuck you jesus
Fuck you christian
So i see you praying
Talking to Jesus
Asking for what?
Nothing at all
I am judas
I am Satan
Fuck you jesus
Fuck you christian
So what has jesus done for you?
Besides be tortured?
He was crying on the cross
Because he was a bitch!!
Fuck you judas
Fuck you Satan
Fuck you jesus
Fuck you christian
A contest entry
- An anarchistic view of christianity and all it's delusional crap by Nogod.
500 points, ended May 12, 2007, 7 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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As an agnostic with no axe to grind and no dog in the fight I must say this really sucks...
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Satan, Judas - both are a part of the Christian belief, and thefore both believe in God and Jesus.
Kind of a gnomer.
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it's not punk, well, it's not '70's punk, it's more like american mall-rat 'punky' style. Pretty funny though...hey! don't diss the bitches
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This isn't even a poem, it's just repeated cursing. If you wanted it to be more powerful, you could've had a decent argument instead of using four-letter-words to back yourself up.
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Ok, I see what you're trying to get across, but like the other "poem" I read, you give reference to the fact that their just might have been an event where someone or thing called jesus was tortured and nailed to a cross. I don't believe this happened. Oh, there may have been some carpenter called jesus, certainly, but to suggest he came from a virgin mother makes him all the more un-realistic. So, although not a bad read, not 100% what is required. But, you still may have a chance, because it seemed to be written in an angry tone. The first couple of lines look eerily similar to a rant I did years ago. Interesting.
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Wow. I don't indulge Christian bashing, but I am glad we live in a country where you have the freedom to do so.
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