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Bleed

My wrist bleeds from pain
My heart bleeds for love

A contest entry

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  • PrettyRagDoll
    May 14, 2007

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    The repetition of the verb "bleeds" creates a very powerful image in the reader; it is both visual and emotional. In so few words, you expressed so much. Thank you for sharing and entering my contest.
    -BabyBear


  • The Hardest Goodbye
    April 29, 2007
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    this is amazing. Short, Sweet and to the point. i enjoyed reading this =) keep em coming!