I don't really need you,
I found that out the other day.
You bring me no joy,
mostly plain old apathy.
I do you no good,
because when i'm around you
frustration only lingers
and I have no joy.
I'm so quick to forgive,
you're so quick to split.
You can't embrace my fears
only leaving me worrying
if or when they will return.
So, no I can't be your fool,
I cannot be fake
we're suppose to shine each other up,
not make each other frown.
Expectations are too high
I want them very low.
Who will put their feet
first out the door?
I bet you'd make the first move.
Please tell me what you think
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excellent
letting out a little frustration in this piece I see. it great to write because you can let it all out and us readers can relate to it.....
Yvonne
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deep dude deep
dude this is really deep and makes you think..why bother
Emily Rose
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sometimes even as much as we want it, it still fails no matter how hard we try if both parties arent into giving it a 100% and sometimes even that isnt enough. this is a really good expressive poem and the last line really leaves you wondering....
Shanelle
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At least one person commented...
Thanks Nell... what's up?
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