Captured on my palm
within lavished morning dew,
flowing glittering curtains down the tree crowns
to imbue the shivering leaves,
calling seed to sprout out of the dark soil,
flying hanging on to blowball's lace,
turning flower's faces,
painting the sky after the rain,
somnolent clouds' brims
and waterfalls' chains,
jumping fish scales,
and at the end of day brimming sails.
Burning sand dunes,
cracked stones,
forgotten white bones,
adding a devastating tune
to the last opaque piece of vaporized mud.
Tied to the misty breath running in the air
dancing over the prismatic ice cubes,
riding the wind
to start again
the same divine dance of life.
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This is lovely.
I really enjoyed floating along with this fabulous imagery.
A great read.
Enjoyed very much.
Thankyou.
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Wow that was very very good. A got a ton of wonderful images and your poetic ability shows very well heare
I love dancing over prismatic ice cubes the most.
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Thank you very much for a such uplifting comment and applause.
~Sonja~
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Wonderful Imagery Sonja
as always in your beautiful writes.
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Just noticed that today I am sending my smiles all over the world. So, here is another one
Thank you for your permanent poetic and friendly support.
~Sonja~
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Congrats
Beautiful imagery..unique..
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Thank you Luna, I am glad that you like it.
~Sonja~
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the circle of life.. Your descriptions were bold and I enjoyed this.
Take Care,
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Thank you Catressa.
~Sonja~
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the dance of life seen here in you whisper of delight for the morning glory is just about to break through the earth's mud and shine a new fragrance to you.
Spring does wonderful things for our muse and appreciation of the fine arts, found within our pen.
carry on!
tamara
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Dear Tam, I am always looking for beauty in simple things, in one morning dew drop, in scattered sun rays. Life is a kind of chain in circle and one must know where to join it. Maybe because of that I am writing poetry, to capture and to collect the right links. You are right, muse is doing that for us, poets.
~Sonja~
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Beautiful!
Oh Sonja
So wonderful to read your poetry! As always your imagery is breathtaking and you have captured the beauty and warmth and all that our sun gives to us!
You penned this beautifully!!
I wish you all the best in the contest!!
I hope you are well my friend... miss you
Linda
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I hope that this time my answer will be accepted from AP site, lol...Thank you dear Linda for your as always kind friendly and poetic support.
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Dear Linda, thank you for your good wishes. I am glad that you like my poetry, maybe it is much better to say, this kind of poetry.
I will go right now to read and comment your sonnet.
I am pretty busy and I do not have much time for AP site but I am ok. See? My modest smile and huge, happy one 
~Sonja~
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hi my dear Sonja
I missed your nice poems. Glad to have you back here.
Wish you the best luck in the contest.
btw...Happy birthday to me.
Shahrzad
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Thank you dear Shahrzad for your comment and applause. My greeting card with best wishes is already on the way.
~Sonja~
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