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Destruction


There's a storm brewing
Stretching the truth
Like two cent bubble gum

Lightning strikes innocent hearts
Winds stronger than a tornado
Fiery revengeful tongue
Erupting rage like volcanoes

Imaginary race
Beaten down paths
Destruction within



Tammy Jo Merritt - 2007 - Yertweetyness

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Hey peeps,
this is a poem that has nothing to do with me.
Call it random thoughts, written poetically. *Smiles*

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  • sewasham gold member
    May 2, 2007

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    Great write, looks like a winner to me. It's good to see you posting on here again TJ. Missed seeing you here. Hope you're still smilin' dear. Take care and Have fun. Steve


  • aliceramone
    April 29, 2007

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    good, unique imagery...stretching the truth like two cent bubble gum and the last three lines...interesting, well done...thanks for entering and good luck in the contest