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vacuum

 

 

 

 

Nightmares in reams of
white paper;
crisp and taunting.


Suggestions of lines
and shapes
trace across the
blank sheets.
Words appear briefly,
then erased before
memory takes them.


Wakening to emptiness;
a quill with no ink,
mind gone blank:
poetic vacuum.

 

 

 

 

 

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  • I-Am-Custard
    April 29, 2007

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    Hmm... This could do with a stanza break, perhaps 2. The words themslves are love, but I wanted some separation of the points you made here, to make the impact of each one more powerful. Thank you for entering.