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a long time ~

I'm giving in
I'm giving up
I can't live without you
anymore

It's gonna happen
we will be us again

Happiness seemed so far away
but as long as you are here
we'll stay
forever

Dreams are dreams and reality is truth
I can't live without you and you can't without me

I'm giving in
I'm giving up
I can't live without you
anymore

I wasn't looking for a way out when it got tough
I was looking for my love

Dreams are dreams and reality is truth
I can't live without you and you can't without me





I love you ~

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It probably doesn't make sense. Shows you what my heads thinking though. ~

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  • A Pen Man
    November 21
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    great one

    there's a story behind this - but as a reader we don't need to know it to get the feel of this one - its that balance which appeals. Great write.


  • DonnasGuy
    May 11, 2007

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    :D

    thats awsome, long time no speak hun, not been here in a couple months, catch up time

    i really loved this one, has a LOT of heart and soul in it, 3 cheers for you hun keep it up

    all the best

    your good friend michael

  • poet18
    April 29, 2007
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    awww

    Such sweet poem.