Invisible the circle stands, with love for you tonight
As hands entwine in unity to take our prayers to flight
The thread of hope and strong belief , with fingers deftly sewn
Creating poets tapestry to show you're not alone
We'll send this tapestry to you upon the wings of prayer
To show the picture of our love, that says how much we care
So gaze upon this gift tonight and know that all is well
For faith can heal a thousand ills, as friendship casts it's spell
A contest entry
- Prayers, love and support for Debilynn by Freed by Mercy.
950 points, ended May 9, 2007, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nice
This is a fine prayer and poem. Good luck in the contest. The Shaker
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The use of the tapestry metaphor is wonderful!
Your rhythm and rhyme work very well, and the sentement expressed for Debilynn is lovely. I'm sure she will traesur this lovely poem. Thank you for entering!
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oh thank you so much for this heartfelt prayer. it means so much to me. i really appreciate you. keep writing! God bless you always
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Powerful, You're poetry makes me love poetry so much more. I'm not usally into the whole non-dark no morbid kinds, but yours are just so entrancing and intresting. :][
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What a lovely idea for an inspirational poem for this lady. I hope all goes well for her. This poem of faith and love is sure to help.
Ann
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