Sorrow is all that’s left
Of what was left of me
These tears have made me blind
To what I could not see
This pain
It hurts so much
How can I fight
What I can't touch
Killing me inside
These sub-conscious emotions
They take away my hope
And fill me with corruption
Fall unto me
Tears of the darkened sky
Weep with me
Help me cry
With no shoulder to cry on
And no one to hold close
Yet I'm filled with so much sorrow
This can’t be the path I chose
Where’s my happy ending
I'm not even promised a tomorrow
Life didn't even leave
The scars so that you can know
No mark of what I've gone through
Nor trace of happiness in my eyes
What kind of nightmare do I live in
Where my happy ending is when I die
Please tell me what you think
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Good
Your words carefully take the reader to a private place where sanity can drift and unravel. Your words entertain a multitude of bewildering emotions that flitter and flutter away in the back of your conscious mind. The imagery of this piece is well suited to the emotions solicited from the author one of dread with sinister reverberations.
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If u ever stop writing poems i will hunt u down and make, these are good, and u said there not so great, no so great my foot
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This is very good. I can see so much emotion expressed in it, and I'm sure many coul relate to it. I think the title is very good and eye-catching, and my favourite lines are: 'Where’s my happy ending/I'm not even promised a tomorrow' - very powerful.
Well done, and keep writing,
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Awwww..... :(
Honey....what a purely emotional write..I can relate to it;since I am more into writing dark writes now....
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