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Two Bullets And A Knife

A soul lost in a love went wrong
Unfaithful hearts yield bleeding results
A romance ended with two bullets and a knife
Used to cut out your heart for my display

Tell me love, did you pay the boatman?
Or did I forget to put the pennies on your eyes?

May your lack of a soul rot in hell for the rest of days
Calculating your imminent death and all of the ways
I could end your life at a moment's notice
Rest now child, your peace with death is soon to come

This is how I beat you and how the west was won
A hammer and an axe to keep you in check
How could you expect to get away with this?
Was an eternity not long enough for you?

Shed the night's sorrow, it'll all be over soon
And then you won't feel a God damned thing
Sheets turned from white to red
In a moment of a crime of passion

Tell me dear, did the boatman take you across?
Or did he kick your ass to the curb?

The scars on my shoulders
Will remind me of our pain
But I'm sure what you went through was worse
A knife isn't usually too forgiving
And a wound doesn't heal instantly

I loved you once but you let me down
I loved you twice and you turned it around
I loved you thrice and shame on me
I loved you four and not again

It's so much easier if you don't struggle
And it won't take as long to bleed out
Understand hon, I did this for you and I
I did this so that you and I could die

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  • Poetic Obscenity
    June 23, 2008

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    O.O

    Omg. Excuse my ...lack of..speech atm. I find this to be the very best poem, i have EVER read. Obviously you've made it to the finalists list and probably have won. (Sh. I didn't tell you) But this is absolutley AMAZING!
    I am so amazed, i can't breathe. Lol. I'm really serious. There's a smile upon my face that refuses to leave. This is a work of genius. Pure genius. The flow, the rythem..the words the story..the everything!
    FLAWLESS. =]
    Thank you dearly for your entry and you don't need luck. =]