I'm a new leaf on the dry stem
I'm a new life in this fake world..
It is a new smile on the dried lips
It is a new wish in the broken heart
A new star shining so bright..
A new day with a pleasant start!
Please tell me what you think
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with warmth
evoking words which inspires a mind to be active well keep it up
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very optimistic
It's nice to read the poem. It's really interesting and it is very positive in each and every line. It has got a beautiful presentation which is made possible due to the similarity in the beginning in each of the lines. I enjoyed it and all the best.
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Thanks Srinivasan..that gives me a boost
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