Painting by: Georgia O'Keeffe
I hear your music,
your soul reaches me.
Dawn approaches, as kisses
multiply, endless minutes
and blissful hours.
Behold...poetry spoken with
eyes and passion with flesh.
You reach the landscape...
of my desires.
To languish as you journey inside
releasing heaven onto me, and I
bliss to you. We unfold, our
core entwine and seeps up
to light.
Eyes open, clarity prevails...
Love has found true paradise.
A contest entry
- Best of the Best by Sapphire Rose.
600 points, ended May 21, 2007, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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you are soooo great at this! love the style. very nicely penned. good luck in the contest. enjoyed the read.
blu
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thanks Blu...SMILE! Getting ready for your birthday i hope?
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I languish as you journey inside
to release heaven onto me, and I
paradise to you. Eyes open, and
clarity prevails...Love has found
its home.
Great poem. It is very awesome. I love this lavender. I would be happy if you could spare your time to stamp your views on my poems too. -
Love the O'Keefe painting, never thought I'd see one here. Glad I did.
I also didn't think I'd see some erotic poetry in my contest. Guess I should just never think I'm going to know what's going to happen. Sure shows me.
It is nicely written, not too descriptive, thank goodness, but seems to be lacking something. Can't quite put my finger to it... might have something to do with the fact I'm going two nights with no sleep. Mayhaps I'll think of it later. But it is nicely done.
Sweetest of dreams! ~D -
Ooooo... nice! Erotic yet done with total class. Wonderful image you left me with. I better not discuss it. Very well done.
Love,
Amera
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