The once was a teacher way out west,
She loved teaching, but she loved fucking best!
And when she fucked, she fucked for keeps
Piled her victims in great god-damned heaps.
Then over the hill came a half-breed Greek
That went by the name of Piss Pot Pete,
Oh Lou knew she'd met her mate,
But to back out now was too damn late.
Upon a hill she took a seat
And ol' Pete sank his meat.
They fucked and fucked and fucked for hours
Tore up bushes, trees, and flowers.
Old Lou died with a mornful cough,
Pete rolled over and finished jacking off!
They hung her tits on the outhouse door
In remembrance of that old whore.
A contest entry
- Inspire me by matshadow.
800 points, ended May 2, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For my favorites and those that have me on their favorites by whiterabbit..
400 points, ended December 11, 2008, 23 entries
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This is private, I don't usually write this stuff, just trying to help.
Comments
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There was a verse missing.. after Piss Pot Pete...
"He put his tool upon the bar,
17 inches,
All callused and scared." Snake watcher -
Hehehe
This was great. Sorry but I couldnt help laughing. Never knew erotic to be humorous before but it was great.
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LOL! Sorry..made me laugh. What a humorous piece this is..I enjoyed reading this, nice job and good luck. ~
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