Remember when we never got along, liked the same girl and all of a sudden became neighbors?, If you see a girl wandering my house, don't look at the rock on her finger that reflects my pity for you back up towards the sun.(p.s. shes the one in the bikini)
Author notes
I laughed at this myself hope you enjoy it.
A contest entry
- One-Line Maddening truth that the neighbors need to know by Melodies.
450 points, ended April 29, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Honest Critiques by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended May 14, 2007, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for subjecting yourself to my review. This sounds like it might be a private joke between two old friends. But to be honest, it did not do a whole lot for me. I did however see the humor in it.
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That makes me laugh. I did like it, and I think that this was funnyer than the other things that won thie one liner contest, but hey I wasn't the judge.
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Liked this, I am not one normally for short poems, but this one got right to the point, I also raised a smile to this one, its good.
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Hahaha. How cute is this. Interesting, and creative. Well done and good luck to you in the contest. ~
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hahahahaHAHAHAHA!
Yes,
Very funny and oh my gosh! 
Thank you for this funny line. 
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Thanks and one more thing
Thanks for the comment!Oh and while were talking about it are we aloud to enter multiple lines or entries if not can you a contest that does?
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