Next time you build a house, make it fireproof, so ours doesn't burn with yours.
A contest entry
- One-Line Maddening truth that the neighbors need to know by Melodies.
450 points, ended April 29, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I wouldn't want my house to burn down with my neighbor's house either. That wouldn't be good.
~Alix -
LOL, very good
Nice David, been a while since I have been here, this was very funny, since I know exactly what it is all about...LOL
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Yo wassup, Bro? Long time no see.
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True; houses are built so close together these days! Good luck!
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A very simple word of wisdom here,fire is a very dangerous and unpredictable thing for one to experience in life.Stay safe.
Blessings
~Cheryl~
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This has an amusing undertone unless you have experienced it. Then its honesty makes one really think...best to you in the contest.
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a good piece, it has some humour tones with a perfect blend of realism.
-Keep the ink flowing!
-Good luck in the contest!!
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Wow..lol. I also hope this isn;t true! Cute line and so true. Good luck to you in the contest. ~
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lol, well tis true. Just we were lucky and only got a bit singed. Our poor neighbor on the other side got burned more than us. Thanks for the wishes!
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WOW!!! That's a good one!
I hope this didn't really happen! 
Thank you for your funny entry!
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