Monthly acne treatment
forty dollars
Gillette Fusion razor and blades
thirty five dollars
New bowling ball to replace one left at bowling alley
one hundred and twenty dollars
Ipod Nano to replace one stolen during gym class
one hundred and eighty dollars
Final Fantasy 11 monthly online fee
twenty dollars
Computer with thirty gigabyte hard drive
six hundred dollars
Flat screen monitor
two hundred forty dollars
eight hooded sweatshirts in black and grey
three hundred dollars
twelve tee shirts with witty sayings
one hundred and twenty dollars
eight pairs of faded jeans
two hundred dollars
One funny feisty fifteen year old son
PRICELESS
Author notes
Option 2
A contest entry
- ~ Priceless Treasures~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended May 5, 2007, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Do you know the muffin man??? by Dreams27.
450 points, ended July 1, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 5 Options for the Creative Poet (26) by bananasfoster42.
700 points, ended June 18, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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awesome! thanks for the entry!
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aww..very sweet!! lovely little write here!! children really are priceless to the parent! no matter how much they spend on possessions!! thank you for entering...good luck! take care, sam (Dreams27) xx
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Beautiful
This poem was itself priceless in the ending. Congrats on the honorable mention.
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This is lovely
How beautiful the love of a mother for a child... I love the imagery and flow of this piece
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Amazing!
Lovely and loving write!
Angie
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LOL
This was fun to read. I have two boys. We won't even talk about what two boys cost. Loved this.
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Why terrifying? It's a take off on the Mastercard commercial. I know that nowadays we tend to throw money at our kids. But these were birthday, Christmasgifts, clothes for school, and reward system for good grades.I"m also trying to describe him with the items I listed. I guessed on most of the prices, what they would be.
Good idea about ebay for witty tees...
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Hey. Start shopping clothes on E-bay. witty Ts and such...
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wow this is great i love it well done a masterpiece in anyones collection xxxx
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I really like this I felt like I was reading a commercial a wonderful take on this contest, and ooh yes how priceless they are.
Love and Light
Frozentearz -
very nice
haha it's like one of those mastercard comercials (excuse my spelling) srry i didn't mean to laugh but that just tikeled me pink
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Aww this is so clever
I love your take on this title!
It shows what we wouldn't do g=fror our kids cos we love them so much. I actaully found this quite an emotional write because the last line tied it altogether so well
All the best with this. It's different!
Gaylene
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you penned this well. despite the expenses of the emotional and financial rearing of your son, you love him
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This indeed was awesome. Beautiul in fact. I enjoyed how you penned this and loved the wonderful picture. Thanks for sharing and best ofluck to you dear.
Vsutton
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This is so cute. I like the way you did this and I love the picture, of what I assume, is your son.
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Thank you.
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Aww, this is really cute. Got a giggle out of this too. Nice job on this and good luck in the contest. ~
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